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雅思寫作真題：文化類話題范文解析

2024/12/26 1:38:12

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點(diǎn)擊上方公號卡片，獲取更多留學(xué)考試資訊根據(jù)雅思官方的評分規(guī)則，雅思寫作的四項(xiàng)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分別為：寫作任務(wù)回應(yīng)情況、連貫與銜接、詞匯豐富程度、語法多樣性與準(zhǔn)確性。下圖是不同分?jǐn)?shù)段的詳細(xì)評分要求。

（圖片來源于雅思官網(wǎng)）在這樣的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)下，雅思大作文應(yīng)該怎么寫呢？今天和大家分享的雅思范文是文化類話題，快來一起看看吧。

作文題目In the past, important knowledge about culture and history was stored in museums. Nowadays, information is freely available on the Internet; therefore, there is no longer any need for museums. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文解析There are those who think that museums are no longer necessary because the internet can provide information on culture and history, while others disagree with this point of view. On the whole, I believe that museums are still important today, despite the availability of information online.On one hand, I can understand why some think that museums are no longer necessary. The internet allows people to quickly find lots of information, including detailed articles, virtual tours, and clear pictures or videos. This easy access is not only convenient but also broadens learning opportunities for people who cannot visit museums due to distance or cost. Websites can also be updated quickly, so they can offer the newest findings and ideas about history to the public, such as recent archaeological discoveries that can be shared instantly worldwide.However, I still believe that museums play a crucial role that the internet cannot completely replace. Museums let people see and be close to real objects from the past, which is different from looking at pictures online. Being in the presence of actual historical items can make people feel a stronger connection and give them a better understanding of history. In addition, museums are not only places to see old things, but are centres for educational activities, community engagement, and cultural celebration. Museums organize exhibits in a way enhance understanding. Finally, museums support the local economy by attracting tourists who spend money and create jobs. For example, the Mona Lisa draws millions of visitors to the Louvre Museum in Paris each year.In conclusion, even though the internet does provide a lot of information freely, museums still offer valuable experiences and benefits. They enhance our understanding and enjoyment of history and culture in ways that the internet cannot fully match.-END- 考鴨們有任何問題  都可掃描圖中二維碼，添加小助手微信 （咨詢課程、領(lǐng)免費(fèi)資料、預(yù)約?？嫉龋?/p>

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